今晚唱K之前到爱琴海民歌餐厅支持一位朋友,好久没到爱琴海了……数一数,已有8年之久。那个地方让我想起18岁那年的一段难过兼难忘的经历。。。最后一次到那儿是和高中的朋友,到底有谁,我已记不起,只记得有宣荣,一位曾经蛮好的朋友,很可惜失去了联络,好希望哪儿天在街上能碰见他,让我们继续那段友谊。
爱琴海搬家了,空间也变小了,但我比较喜欢现在的地点,因为外头是一条宽阔又清静的走廊,有大自然与新鲜的空气,而不是从前那熙来攘往,充满压迫感的购物中心。现在的环境显然比较适合让人放松心情,沉醉在听歌的享受中。
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好啦,标题都说是“给你的评语”了,我就该把话题拉回来。ok,你要我把我和秀萍给你的评语记在我的部落格。其实刚才在电话里头都跟你说过了咯,你要print out然后天天看,天天练习,慢慢进步是吗?=P anyway,你别嫌闷,因为我这里写的和我刚才跟你说的没什么不一样。我会尽量想一些刚才没说过的。
1) 小动作:坐着的时候拼命摇左脚。不算很拚命,但专业的表演不该有这种动作。还有站着时,左手拿麦克风,右手就拼命拉大腿的库管。一首Piano的第一遍我就看到你拉了4次。maybe other pple not so observant la, but 我注意到咯,itz ugly leh. pple may think u do it out of nervousness or inconfidence.
2) 歌声太尖:有些歌曲的前面或第一遍,不需要用太过实的音,比如“爱如潮水”、“不要对他说”。你用的是真音,但是可以虚一点(虚真音),more airy voice,到了后面才会比较有contrast。而且你的实真音有时候会有一点尖。比较尖的声音,or call it亮的音,more suitable to use more during chorus or the parts where itz more 激昂。歌曲的前面chest voice 应该再加强,still lack abit of chest voice lah.
3) 嘴型:这个是我现在突然想到的。我在想,你的实真音有时候那么尖,是不是因为你嘴巴开得太小的关系?not totally bcos of dis lah, but maybe kind of affect more or less. u open ur mouth small when u sing, that means the space for the sound to come out is narrowed, the space narrowed, hence, the frequency higher, 声音就变尖。
4) 对确切的歌曲的评语不多,因为有时候我在帮你拍照,stressed,怕拍得不好,所以不能focus on listening to ur singing。只记得Forever Love后面部分很尖,听了不舒服,应该柔一点、虚一点,but后来一句你有用柔+虚就sound beta。秀萍说“如果你还爱我”你唱得很好,有感情。haiya,y is that ur last song?! i like that song so much leh! but no chance to listen carefully, cos last song liao, so i walk behind trying to take some more photos of the full view of the stage. haiya, nxt time u must sing this song again lah, i want to listen.
你唱JJ的歌,我不知道要怎么说。不好不坏,你唱的时候pitch & rhythm都准,听了也觉得舒服。techniques wise i oso feel itz ok,不过就是缺少了一点什么,听了之后没办法让我留下深刻印象。可能少了感情和contrast吧,or wateva element,我just说不出是什么。or maybe JJ sang his songs too well, so difficult for others to make an impression with his songs.
5) Showmanship:极需加强!but of coz dis takes time & experience & exposure. 在台上不太会说话。bcos和partner练得不够多,所以你不懂她的key,她不懂你的key, sometimes dunno when to come in, sometimes halfway thru the song, u all will whisper about the song, like, u sing or i sing, or the key or something like dis. no gd to do dis too much when on stage.
try to find ur key for every song, so that u can tell the instrumentalist, whoever it is, even it is not ur partner, then u oso can sing well, then u wont show the unsure face of dunno the key rite or not, or wrong key, gotta re-start again.
秀萍说你相当有potential, image nice, voice special & stable, good singing. don worry, 你说你快要破音的地方,我们根本没听出来,so u r safe. should keep on trying for auditions if u r keen to sing.
well, just my two cents worth, hope the comments r helpful. don forget u owe me drinks hor, for takin photos & wrting dis blog for u, heh heh… gd performance tonite, din disappoint ur audience!